September Rising (a book in the progress!)

Hey Zilker 5th-grade panthers! It's me Trinity, and I need some help on my new book, "September Rising". It's going to be a book about a little girl named September, who was born on 9/11 and she grows up as an orphan. A couple from California comes to the orphanage in downtown Brooklyn, and adopts September. They go back to California and so September is a new girl in a HUGE school. If you have any ideas, please leave a comment. Thanks!